NIW推荐信问题,请教有经验的各位

我老板将我起草的一些溢美之词改了,变成诸如"As part of her postdoctoral training at my lab to help develop critical skills, I offen had Dr.XX assist me in the initial review of manu ted by others for publication in XXX..."

我怎么在petition letter 里对此挽回一下?
各位什么好建议? 多谢!

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• 回复：NIW推荐信问题,请教有经验的各位 -freecall- ♂ (69 bytes) () 08/15/2006 postreply 09:20:08

• 建议：你写好每份推荐信后，最好请个美国人看看，改改语法错误。 -puma0202- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/15/2006 postreply 12:21:04