Need NIW cover letter feedback

Dear All, following is my draft of NIW cover letter. Please help me to double check. Any inpout is really really appreciated. Thanks a lot!!!

RE: ORGINAL SUBMISSION
I-140 filed concurrently with I-485 form

Dear Adjudicating Officer,

This is to file an I-140 petition concurrently with an I-485 application. Following completed forms, initial evidence and application fees are enclosed. Thank you for you time and effort to process my case.

Forms, initial evidence and application fees for me:

1. Form I-140
2. Form ETA-750B
3. Form I-485
4. From G-325A
5. Form I-131
6. Copy of passport and visa
7. Copy of I-94
8. Copies of prior approval notices, form I-20 and EAD card.
9. Copy of driver’s license
10. Copy of birth certificate
11. Copy of marriage certificate
12. Photos: four identical passport-style photos, two for I-485 application, two for advance parole document.
13. Checks: $190 for I-140, $315 for I-485 application, $70 for biometrics service, $165 for I-131 application.
14. Employment Support Letter
15. Curriculum Vitae
16. Copy of Ph.D. diploma
17. Support letters
18. Copies of requests and confirmation to be a reviewer for journal articles..
19. Copy of document proving me as an international conference organizer
20. Copies of receipt of paid dues of membership in professional organizations.
21. Copies of the first pages of all published articles.
22. Copies of presentation at national and international conferences.
23. Copy of patent disclosure.

Forms, initial evidence and application fees for wife

1. Form I-485
2. From G-325A
3. Form I-131
4. Copy of passport and visa
5. Copy of I-94
6. Copy of driver’s license
7. Copy of birth certificate
8. Copy of marriage certificate
9. Photos: four identical passport-style photos, two for I-485 application, two for advance parole document.
10. Checks: $315 for I-485 application, $70 for biometrics service, $165 for I-131 application
11. Employment letter
24. Copies of prior approval notices and EAD card.

所有跟帖： 

• 好！再给老婆填个I-134，让移民官放心她以后不会去吃补助 -律师都准备不了这么好- ♀ (16 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:00:40

• 回复：好！再给老婆填个I-134，让移民官放心她以后不会去吃补助 -Thanksfor- ♀ (178 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:10:16

• My attorney did one for my -wife,since- ♀ (41 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:14:05

• 这样最稳妥，I-134只要你批准就行， -最简单不过- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:19:44

• i suggest to put your name -sleepbluey- ♀ (37 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:53:22

• 回复：i suggest to put your name -Willdoit- ♀ (34 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 08:57:47

• Sleepbluey, does this look -good?Thx!- ♀ (116 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 09:08:56

• good -sleepbluey- ♀ (193 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 10:23:01

• 回复：Need NIW cover letter feedback -sanq5- ♀ (41 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 10:29:13

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• Need to buy a book -Not2easy- ♀ (24 bytes) () 09/25/2005 postreply 12:00:18

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