A modified sample

Communication is always a key to survive in business environments. When you write an email or letter, make sure to avoid repetitive words. A simple way is the best way. If you don't mind, I modified your original thank-you letter as follows:

Dear Mr. X,

Thank you for interviewing me today. It was exciting to talk to you, Mr. Y and Mr. Z.

Through the conversation, I had a very good understanding about your company’s business model, scope, and organization culture. Also, I got a pretty good idea about my role with Company W if hired. I strongly believe I will be a good fit and will make great contributions to the company. I will grow with the company together.

Currently, I am in the process of applying for PE in U State. Please let Mr. Y and Mr. Z know that I am very interested in working for the Company W. Also, please pass my appreciation to them for interviewing me today.

Have a great weekend!

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

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