Would you please revise this article?

来源: 于 2010-10-20 03:32:05 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

Would you please revise this article? -- I wrote that late last night, exhausted and sure made bunch of mistakes~~~ cleaned it up this morning and hope it's more accurate by now~~~ Thanks so very much!!!

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