兄之七律,越发老辣,笔触苍劲有力,必须大赞!
颈联后句,稍微调整一下,屠民犹道朕宽容,更觉痛快,如何?
兄之七律,越发老辣,笔触苍劲有力,必须大赞!
颈联后句,稍微调整一下,屠民犹道朕宽容,更觉痛快,如何?
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谢谢老师指正,我当时也觉得这句不太好,但想不出来更好的。谢谢老师~
-一剑无痕-
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12/29/2025 postreply
17:31:38
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一剑兄客气了。与共识者相互切磋交流,乃一大快事也。。。
-山水苍茫-
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12/30/2025 postreply
10:43:29
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