suno创作的rap

俺写的歌词,上传后不到一分钟除了2个版本,比较一下,哪个好听些

 

Wet Dream

Once upon a time in the Gaslamp District
I was walking my Scottish Terrier Biscuit
We strolled deep into the district 
Suddenly stopped and barked my poor Biscuit
From the corner of a pride banner alley
Marching out a rowdy rally
After a sniff Biscuit started dashing and weaving
through the rally without clashing
I was pulled sprinting and panting
while deafened by the most synched chanting
Let's go Brandon
Let's go Brandon
As we reached the end of the rally
we saw a gigantic puppet upside down
It’s an inflated black-suit buffoon
wearing an wavy orange crown
Biscuit sneaked around the the balloon
till he stopped in front of a grand building
Its neons flashing rainbow at high noon
DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE
my Biscuit barked out his sign reading
Pace and sniff, pace and sniff
He spotted a drying rack tall and wide
Hung on the rack a king bed sheet
fancy enough for the royal groom and bride
Biscuit sniffed and sneezed at a conspicuous stain
Its shape looked like a country club in Spain
I image searched the stain with my iPhone
AHA, it's Mar-a-Lago in a Tsunami zone
Before I google Mar-a-Lago I may adore
I was tapped by a blonde circling on roller-skates
She pointed at Hooters next door
Smelly the fried chicken I just ate
I shook my head n pointed at the stain
She glanced and bursted out "Oh, not again"
To answer my confusion to her scream
she bent down and whispered to my brain
It's hand drawing of our AG's wet dream

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据说德皇 Joseph II 听了莫扎特首演后的评论 -木有文化- 给 木有文化 发送悄悄话 木有文化 的博客首页 (60 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 08:51:31

哈哈哈,也是你对suno的评论?还是对俺的歌词,too many words? -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 09:01:51

哈哈,我有时看帖脑海里会浮现第一个画面,就发了,并不一定有专指 -木有文化- 给 木有文化 发送悄悄话 木有文化 的博客首页 (38 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 09:33:59

哈哈哈,这位童鞋,要自信,要相信你的歌词写得挺好的。 -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (167 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:10:05

哈哈哈 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:32:07

一个黑人,一个白人 -老键- 给 老键 发送悄悄话 老键 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 10:49:09

哪个黑,哪个白? -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 11:28:57

第一个黑人,第二个白人 -kingfish2010- 给 kingfish2010 发送悄悄话 kingfish2010 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 11:58:32

从歌里听出了黑人口音和白人口音的差别?展开说说。:) -JoyAnna.- 给 JoyAnna. 发送悄悄话 JoyAnna. 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:06:27

我瞎猜的,哈哈。 不过,我有个英国朋友说他能听出来黑人,白人,亚洲人的声音 -kingfish2010- 给 kingfish2010 发送悄悄话 kingfish2010 的博客首页 (120 bytes) () 02/23/2025 postreply 08:17:50

2让我想到Eminem -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 12:33:54

Exactly -老键- 给 老键 发送悄悄话 老键 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 13:24:32

更喜欢第一个,听觉和”视觉“一致:) -cw- 给 cw 发送悄悄话 cw 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 02/22/2025 postreply 18:49:32

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