我建议你深沉可不是让你沉重玩repentance恨不能撞墙死了算了的那种。当然这是我个人意见
我记得原来来这里的有一个翻译Housman,你看他的内容,有谷堆,士兵,夕阳,林家姑娘,大多不是我见到的这网上流行的(包括你的啊)完全是风啊影啊的抒情派。当然可能华人一说到诗歌好像必须抒情,但是抒情我想只是心声的一种,你看看中国的古诗,写情话景的肯定有,抒胸意的恐怕更多,更感人。
我觉两个例子吧。
Tell all the truth but tell it slant -------by Emily Dickinson
Tell all the truth but tell it slant
Success in Circuit lies
Too bright for our infirm Delight
The Truth's superb surprise
As Lightning to the Children eased
With explanation kind
The Truth must dazzle gradually
Or every man be blind
Homer的
To the brave and strong
Rest seems inglorious,and the night too long
But sleep'st thou now, when from you hill the foe
Hangs o'er the fleet, and shades our walls below
先说,我读的诗不多(肯定比你少多了),纯粹是个人感觉。我的建议是,你既然喜欢,不妨把视野放开一点多一点尝试,反正也是自己玩自娱自乐。