情人节快乐 贴个旧的直白的助性

Oh my Shangri-La

On a smothering summer day in Louisiana,
I breathed as I were in Shangri-La.
You left me behind for a weeklong tour,
to that lost mountain paradise.
I greeted your return as I endure,
all my fervor in disguise.
But my eyes speak love!
But my eyes plead love!
Oh my Shangri-La,
still dwells in Louisiana.

On a smothering summer day in Louisiana,
I breathed as I were in Shangri-La.
I was blinded by your skin,
fair and milky.
I was numbed by your chin,
velvety and silky.
But my heart sees love!
But my heart feels love!
Oh my Shangri-La,
still dwells in Louisiana.

© 4 years ago, xx   rhyme • love   
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Liz G Lucas - Awh! That's lovely. Nicely written I really enjoyed that. Thanks for sharing. 4 years ago   

Matthew Loveland - Wonderful poem. Perhaps one of the best I ever read here. So much emotion and depth, and it reads so well. Thank you for sharing.

Lovely poem 4 years ago  

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• 能耐，用英文写情诗！ -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2022 postreply 10:28:53

• 不敢不敢献丑助性 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2022 postreply 10:30:14

• fair and milky~~~想到了昨天的一个场景~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2022 postreply 10:32:54

• really? lol -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2022 postreply 10:45:10

• 好美的香格里拉 -枫丹白露- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2022 postreply 10:45:10

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