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《面朝大海 春暖花开》—— 海子

从明天起，做一个幸福的人
喂马，劈柴，周游世界
从明天起，关心粮食和蔬菜
我有一所房子，
面朝大海，春暖花开

从明天起，和每一个亲人通信
告诉他们我的幸福
那幸福的闪电告诉我的
我将告诉每一个人

给每一条河每一座山取一个温暖的名字
陌生人，我也为你祝福
愿你有一个灿烂的前程
愿你有情人终成眷属
愿你在尘世获的幸福
我只愿面朝大海，春暖花开

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《Spring Blossoms and the Sea》

From tomorrow on, I will be a happy camper
Feeding horses, chopping wood, travelling the world
From tomorrow on, I will care for grains and vegetables
I have a house, facing the sea, engulfed with spring blossoms

From tomorrow on, I will message my beloved ones
Telling them of my happiness
What the gleeful lightings has told me
I will share with all of them

I will give a homely name to each river and every mountain
To you, strangers of mine, I also offer my blessing:
May you have a brilliant future
May you and your beloved become one
May you have a merry life on the earth
And I, I only wish to face the sea, engulfed with spring blossoms