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I was told on (date) that I am promoted to (职位)with increased salary to (工资)。 I belive (你有多好,聘了你对他们有多大好处)and prefer to work for (新公司). I'd like to know if you can match XYZ.
现在是真刀真枪提要求的时候了,“My promotion in current company is in progress!” 这种话是我的专利。