关于简历

最近在家改简历，有个问题想请教一下。

我以前的简历都是这样：Career Objective, Professional Experience，Education, Technical Skills. 语言简短朴实（基本就是list)，一页。

我被公司layoff 以后，公司专门请了个recruiting company 给我们提供专业简历修改，把我的简历换汤不换药地改了一通。格式更漂亮，语言也很花俏。特别是在开头给加了这样一段：Analytical, detail-oriented software quality assurance tester with expertise in manual and automated test case creation and execution, developing test plans, test cases and test scripts. Demonstrated ability to logically and systematically analyze and solve software problems, define scope and objectives for complex quality testing projects, and handle multiple projects simultaneously. Strong communication skills, fluent in English and Chinese with the capacity to work independently and consistently contribute in a team-oriented environment.

我个人觉得有点多余，因为技能方面的在Professional Experience里有更详细的。他们还把Career Objective也给delete了。有这种写法吗？请教一下，谢谢。