I have some thought about my review in these days

Here is my talk point of next Monday:
-- I re-think about my focal review in this couple days. I can not agree with the rating you give to me;
-- I have been working as a dog in last year, earned $$ revenure for the company, save N month time for the project... So technically all you guys knew I am strong~~
-- I have been nice to everybody, so people like me and know I am a good team member;
-- I knew I am not perfect, but, this shouldn't bring me a rating of underperformance;
-- I understood this year's review will not have salary increment, however, the under-performance rating is NOT fair for me.
-- I will make improvement to make myself better, but, I will not accept the under-performance rating.
-- I will write this exactly comment on my review form, I will talk to HR about my thought. You are welcome to join me when I talk with HR.
-- I am sure you agree with me that my comment is reasonable and correct.

-- I will not quit job, I like the job so much.