比俺当年写的好多了, 但是.....

Very nice letter, mnuch better than my first English job letter.
However, suggest you hold on this letter now wait after we do modify for you.
I am not quite sure what is the situation and what you want. This is what I guess:
-- They did offer you a TEMP contractor position, but ask you work as a SLAVE for many many hours a day, only pay you 8 hours/day, is this true?
-- You want a permenant position. If NOT get it, you want a TEM position to be payed by hour for every hour you worked. Is this true?
Thanks!