谢谢。首联出律是有意而为,颔联出律是因为秦桧,颈联三连平有点修改余地。尾联流水对可改也可随意。
所有跟帖:
• "逐儿郎",应该是仄平平;逐,入声字. -墨瑞- ♀ (335 bytes) () 06/13/2011 postreply 03:48:24
• 学习了。北方人这入声有点掌握不好。 -玄野- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2011 postreply 04:34:15
• "逐儿郎",应该是仄平平;逐,入声字. -墨瑞- ♀ (335 bytes) () 06/13/2011 postreply 03:48:24
• 学习了。北方人这入声有点掌握不好。 -玄野- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2011 postreply 04:34:15
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