【七绝】秋思
疏窗听雨洗秋尘,
薄雾吟风裹玉痕。
别梦依稀寒月影,
离人寸寸断肠魂。
⊙平⊙仄仄平平,(韵)
⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)
⊙仄⊙平平仄仄,
⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)
【七绝】秋思
疏窗听雨洗秋尘,
薄雾吟风裹玉痕。
别梦依稀寒月影,
离人寸寸断肠魂。
⊙平⊙仄仄平平,(韵)
⊙仄平平仄仄平。(韵)
⊙仄⊙平平仄仄,
⊙平⊙仄仄平平。(韵)
• 荡月沉湖星满天/露华初白未能眠/为谁彻夜风中立/不是离忧只自怜 -nianni- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/26/2010 postreply 22:18:49
• 为谁彻夜风中立--好句。谢谢光临~~ 问好nianni! -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2010 postreply 08:32:38
• 离人寸寸断肠魂,一天一斤成瘦身,化作薄雾入风里,来年细看小英痕 -秦照- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/26/2010 postreply 22:42:13
• 你先瘦给遍野看看?一天一斤...... -紫色王家- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/27/2010 postreply 04:07:27
• 问好紫MM!~~ -遍野- ♀ (54 bytes) () 10/27/2010 postreply 08:28:50
• 谢谢司令临帖和诗!~~ -遍野- ♀ (73 bytes) () 10/27/2010 postreply 08:31:14
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