除却枯叶栽玉芽==除却枯枝栽玉芽。似更好些,后两句不错:)
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• 回复:Happy to see you comment. I will do. Wish you all the best. -笑秋风- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2009 postreply 05:42:42
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• 回复:Happy to see you comment. I will do. Wish you all the best. -笑秋风- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2009 postreply 05:42:42
• 安静诗改得好,片片拍得太到位了。搂主改名吧,叫笑冬风如何? -小二嫂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2009 postreply 17:02:44