云三首

(1)
飘泊无根恨有涯
依依眷恋雨中花
此身不羡天堂美
毕竟人间是我家
(2)
谁裁金缕绣风裙
舞袖翩翩似婉君
长向西山邀日暮
满天霞雨也纷纷
(3)
一片痴情为雨迷
渐飞渐远渐行低
终归好梦都如此
唯有春心挂月西

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• 人间天堂 -鸣凡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2008 postreply 11:03:21

• 意象派~ :) -淼~~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2008 postreply 11:48:27

• 淼MM好. -一书生- ♂ (30 bytes) () 09/23/2008 postreply 09:55:45

• Each piece is very good! -XiaoLinchuan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2008 postreply 13:20:12

• 好飘逸的云 -枫丹白露- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2008 postreply 13:30:24

• 书生携云去诗坛，海上万里唯见蓝~~~ -海上云- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2008 postreply 19:36:12

• 海大侠指点武林录,好不快哉! -一书生- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/23/2008 postreply 09:57:15

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