Try to make the article more
neutral. Stop using biased languages and attacks. Talk more facts and use less accusations to others. This article could be a lot more persuasive that way.
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• 完全同意。客观地说此文的表述有明显的倾向性,希望出现更多更有说服力的文章来支持我们国家的完整。 -8026- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/26/2008 postreply 16:21:23