读出你的情节安排了. 这样的平铺直叙, 比较简明生动.

来源: bottlemanfly 于 2015-06-29 17:30:48 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

比前头那章中的长段心里描写要强.

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