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大顶主贴和你的改贴!
-行者一路歌-
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04/03/2014 postreply
10:58:47
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多谢野性博主好建议,改了后,意思清楚多了。我过分拘泥平仄和韵律,诗的意思受了很大影响。让我再仔细想想,看是否能找到一个最佳点。
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04/03/2014 postreply
11:42:19
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过分拘泥平仄和韵律没必要。能照顾到格律则照顾,不能就舍声取意。 自古如此。
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04/03/2014 postreply
11:55:53
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