儿子的小说-蚂蚁历险记（第二部）

 

    儿子安周末喜欢和姐姐玩编故事的游戏，最近又开始继续他的威廉蚂蚁历险记的故事，故事的主人公，小蚂蚁威廉“一如既往”地顽皮，闯祸，历险，最后获救。那天姐姐听了弟弟杜撰的故事，觉得很有趣，找到弟弟的笔记本，让他续写 The Adventure of William (威廉蚂蚁历险记）。安饶有兴致地写了该系列的第二部，共六页，姐姐阅读弟弟的故事后，还很用心地为弟弟的作品添了插图。杰明也读了故事，边读边笑。

  

    今夜两个孩子已熟睡，我在灯下打入安小说的第二部，想着明早给他一个大惊喜（big pleasant surprise）

 

    第二部的故事梗概大致是：威廉蚂蚁和爸爸，威廉的姐姐和妈妈分别开车去赏蚂蚁瀑布。他们边开车，边赛车， 威廉的姐姐和妈妈赢了一分钟。 威廉在宾馆里和姐姐玩“拇指搏斗”的游戏，姐姐总赢，威廉只赢了一次，为此他很高兴。

    第二天早上全家去看瀑布，威廉对巨大的瀑布很感兴趣，越走越近，没有听他爸爸的话，掉入瀑布里了。威廉求救，但没有人在旁边，他需要游10英里才能到岸上，他感觉自己快被淹没了。还好，威廉父母让姐姐骑着摩托艇到瀑布里救威廉。威廉正被鳄鱼追踪，恰好看到骑着摩托艇的姐姐，向姐姐呼救，姐姐救了弟弟，全家回到宾馆。

    威廉爸爸对威廉的大意而失望，他体罚了威廉（关禁闭和打屁股），威廉接受教训，下不为例。

 

The Adventures of William 威廉蚂蚁历险记（第二部）

作者：毕安（8岁）

 

Chapter One: Ant Falls  第一章节：蚂蚁瀑布

William is now 8 and is older and he went with his Dad to the ant falls. His sister went with her Mom too. They took seperate cars so they could race. His sister and her Mom won by one minute, so they got there.

 

Chapter Two: The Arrival  第二章节：到达

Williaw was having fun at the hotel. He was thumb-wrestling with his sister Ashlyn and Ashlyn kept on winning except one time William won. He was very happy he won. They went to the ant falls the next morning and William said, "It's huge!" And he kept on staring at it. He was so amazed that he went even closer. His Dad said,"don't get too close." William said,"One more step..." uh-oh...

 

Chapter Three: William Slips 第三章节：威廉跌倒

William stepped one more step and his father said, "No, don't do it," while watching William fall. William said,"help, help, help," but nothing could help even if he said it louder, no one was there to help him. All William could do was to swim and scream. But if he were to swim, he had to swim 10 miles. "Oh, no," said William, "what am I going to do? I am going to drown......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

 

Chapter Four: The Rescue Motor Boat 第四章节：救援摩托艇

William was about to drown until William's Dad and Mom asked Ashlyn to ride a motor boat and save William. A shark chased William. William saw a motor boat with Ashlyn and William called out, "Over here Ashlyn." And Ashlyn came to save william and their family went to the hotel.

 

Chapter Five: The Lesson  第五章节：教训

William's Dad was very upset and gave William some decipline like timeouts and spanks. William  was crying, "wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh." He was crying and crying and crying. When he was done crying, his Dad said to William, "don't do that ever again," and William said, "OK".

 

And this ends the story.

 

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