"Their Hearts Were Full Of Spring" - Lead

清唱一首，諸位點撥一二，如何改進？這是 lead 部分，或許4個聲部都試試？有什麽好的工具可以合成？

 

When Lovers stay togather and never grow apart.
Some magic ingredient was with them from the start
So when I sad and lonely, and miss you most of all, this enchanted tale of love  I do recall

I recall

There's a story told of a very gentle boy
And the girl who wore his ring
Through the wintery snow
The world they knew was warm
For their hearts were full of spring

As the days grew old
And the nights passed into time
And the weeks and years took wind
Gentle boy, tender girl
Their love remained still young
For their hearts were full of spring

Then one day they died
And their graves were side by side
On a hill where robins sing
And they say violets
Grow there the whole year round
For their hearts were full of spring

所有跟帖： 

• 声音挺好听.音准也挺好. 是不是跟着音乐录的? -飞渡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2016 postreply 13:18:34

• 赞清唱！说说第一段的发音：第一个音似乎颤颤的就出来了,记得有谁说过，唱歌的第一个字是非常重要的。。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (472 bytes) () 06/20/2016 postreply 15:03:41

• 谢谢金玉之言，我唱了几遍不是这里有点问题就是那里有点缺陷。 -贝城- ♀ (292 bytes) () 06/20/2016 postreply 20:44:16

• 赞清唱！加油！ -微雨如酥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2016 postreply 17:03:35

• 赞。 -梦中夕阳下的高梁桥- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2016 postreply 21:10:24

• 声音不错 ：)) -by心言- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2016 postreply 05:54:08

• 我不太敢听自己的清唱！你唱得蛮好的，至少比我强，哈哈！ -hot_powerz- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2016 postreply 13:19:29

• 赞清唱! -BlueTech- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2016 postreply 17:01:14

• 赞清唱！加油！ -微雨如酥 -tugan- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2016 postreply 06:36:17

• 清唱特别考唱功，点赞 -xerl- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2016 postreply 21:19:29