【四言名诗】Why did I dream of you last night? 缘何梦君？

Why did I dream of you last night?  缘何梦君？

 

Why did I dream of you last night?                            缘何梦君？

Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light      拂晓暗褪

Memories strike home, like slaps in the face;            旧忆叩扉

Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fog                     以肘支颐

beyond the window.                                                 透窗凝雾

 

So many things I had thought forgotten                  原以皆忘

Return to my mind with stranger pain:                    岂料忆溃

—Like letters that arrive addressed to someone      似笺翩至

Who left the house so many years ago.                  昔人已去

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• 不懂平仄，韵律，改着玩，勿怪 -观众而已- ♂ (286 bytes) () 08/03/2021 postreply 09:16:56

• 改的很好，四言一般不讲平仄，最多就是争取押韵。我也是写着玩的。 -WXCTEATIME- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2021 postreply 10:19:21