雪夜驻足小林，重翻一遍。

雪夜驻足小林 （译飞花落梦）

小林之主你可知
应居不远村落处
可知驻足立于此
尽赏小林雪遍布

懵懂小马亦惊异
缘何却步荒野处
寒林幽昧湖冰封
又是一年最暗时

鬃摇蹄翘铃叮当
似问行程可有误
遍野空旷无人答
寒风低语雪绒花

 小林深深引人入
心搁繁务意恐迟
再进一程又一行
方能卸装得安息

 

                                                                stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening (1923)

－－Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.




The woods are lovely, dark, and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

所有跟帖： 

• 不错不错 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:44:48

• 谢了谢了 ：） -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:45:30

• 原诗的调子平静但不轻快， -立- ♀ (104 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:51:25

• 这就是再创作了 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:52:40

• 立的评论也有诗意:) -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 13:53:48

• 后一句却 -立- ♀ (155 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:29:48

• 飞花落地，暗香入梦，青春消逝，唯留回忆 -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:33:57

• 飞花落梦无静时，这感觉是最后一句，你往前走走呗 -CRUSH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:34:04

• 对啊， -立- ♀ (143 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:40:00

• 就是此意:) -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:44:19

• 喜欢mr. Frost 的诗。 -marilyn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 14:22:13

• ：） -飞花落梦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/15/2015 postreply 15:24:23