尘凡，你这篇问题是语言风格不一致，角色与视角模糊漂移不定。读起来没有代入感，或者就是拒绝代入感。。。。

来源: FarewellDonkey18 于 2020-12-02 09:33:51 [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

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