【七律】雪后

【七律】雪后

 

幽居广漠日漫漫，梦境无垠素毯宽。

雪色南侵原野寂，阳春冬伏曙天寒。

窗前剪影思时淡，雪后江山醉里看。

霙落人间头易白，飞天入地觅长安。

 

After Snow

 

Living in the vast desert, the days are long.

After snowing, the dreamland

is boundless, under a white blank

that extends beyond my sight.

 

The snow invades the south.

The wilderness is silent.

The spring is still hibernating.

The morning sky is chilling.

 

In front of the window your silhouette

is missing when I miss you.

The mountains and rivers

in the snow make me drunk.

 

My head turns white faster

when it's snowing.

It hasn't been easy to go up and down,

searching for lasting peace.

 

(© Feb. 17, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 窗前剪影思时淡，雪后江山醉里看。 -yongshi99- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 16:27:50

• 請問，出句可以入韻嗎？哪怕是仄聲韻。 -油翁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/18/2024 postreply 13:31:04

• 你为啥问我？看看人家九兄。。。 -yongshi99- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2024 postreply 08:03:27

• 根据惜也老师说的，除了第一联，出句要尽量避免用跟韵脚同韵母的字 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:00:37

• 雪后江山醉里看。~~~ -山水苍茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 17:04:48

• 联联精彩，好律欣赏，周日愉快： -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/18/2024 postreply 08:35:20

• 不经意间，就引出千古名句 -冠军侯- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/18/2024 postreply 21:26:09

• 侯兄谬赞了 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:01:14

• 淡字撞韵。 -白九- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2024 postreply 05:34:54

• 学习了！ -yongshi99- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2024 postreply 08:10:21

• 因为这个原因，考虑过用杳、遁等字，想来想去，还是觉得意境不如淡字好，就还是用了淡 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/21/2024 postreply 20:03:31