逸士过年好，一点小探讨~~

天上碧桃和露種﹐日邊紅杏倚雲栽
您的翻译：
The green peach is grown with dew on Heaven;
The red apricot planted leaning on clouds by the sun.

是不是改成这样更好点，grow可以有被动，但大多数时间都用成主动，有自然生长的意思
plant当种，栽讲，个人认为用成被动更合理些

grow against sth - 植物倚着什么生长，自然之态，
Train a plant to grow against a wall or framework

这里紅杏倚云而长，姿态袅袅，慵懒美丽
The green peach is planted with dew on Heaven，
the red apricot growing against clouds by the sun.

一点浅见~~~