才发现这一版你做了一点改动。经这么一点修改,诗歌太太流畅了。意思也更通顺。
好诗啊:)
bear,新年快乐!
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还有,以后你要跟紫君阿美好好学学制贴。
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01/01/2011 postreply
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haha ok.
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01/02/2011 postreply
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sad, i missed the day:(
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01/02/2011 postreply
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even worse
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01/02/2011 postreply
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cold.
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01/02/2011 postreply
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hehehe nice haiku poems!
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01/02/2011 postreply
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前天看了六世达赖的3行3行一段的诗,就想起来haiku。
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01/02/2011 postreply
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I am so sorry to hear that
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