haha, i am glad you asked. 半个十四行诗 is a new form of 十四行诗

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1. still 14 lines, but only half of the number of syllables. in a standard sonnet, there are a total of 140 syllables, with 10 in each line. but in this new form, there are only 70 syllables, therefore half a sonnet,

2. in the original format, there are 10 syllables in each line, but here, only about half of the lines consist of 5 syllables each, and the other two stanzas are of 6 and 4 syllables in each line. in this sense, half a sonnet,

3. in a traditional sonnet, each line normally is comprised of 5 iambs (unstressed/stressed), but in this new form, only about half lines follow the unstressed/stressed rule, thus half a sonnet,

4. again in the old form, there are 7 rhyming pairs, but here about 3 or 3.5, again half a sonnet

haha

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谢诗人详细专业的回复,我得认真学习。 -紫君- 给 紫君 发送悄悄话 紫君 的博客首页 (69 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:41:08

谢谢你的专业水平的提问,我来陪读。也谢诗人。 -福田- 给 福田 发送悄悄话 福田 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:45:24

福田真谦虚,你的双语诗歌精彩,诗人也. -紫君- 给 紫君 发送悄悄话 紫君 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:53:58

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