何物在独白？

来源: falsetruth 于 2010-11-06 19:38:04 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (268 bytes)
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a turtle starts to push his way

into a bush to find his May

arriving at my yawning door

he thrusts in and out till he's sour

the bush is suddenly flooded

my valley becomes so mudded

when it's time for my door to shut

the turtle slips back to his hut

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• when he arrives --> arriving at, 妹--> May （五月花） -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2010 postreply 20:00:00

• 点击你主贴里的[编辑],即可把[妹]该成[May].你的诗总是如此的押韵. -婉蕠- ♀ 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (248 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 08:58:06

• thank you. it's a name -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (171 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 09:54:22

• Got it. Thank you. Have a nice Sunday. -婉蕠- ♀ 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 10:24:35

• Oops,I meant so type:"One more thing". -婉蕠- ♀ 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 16:55:54

• also you meant -falsetruth- ♀ 给 falsetruth 发送悄悄话 (82 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 18:31:09

• Yeah, thanks. Good night. -婉蕠- ♀ 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2010 postreply 19:47:21

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