你还真是老熊,作诗还是没有突破哈,俺来示范一下下~

本帖于 2010-07-07 14:13:35 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

Beloved eagle

For you,
a fire blazes in my heart

So strong
The cinders alone
Could bring a thousand hot bubs to a boil

So intense
The embers alone
Could melt the North Pole and
Let polar bears frolic in the tropic ocean

So glaring
The glow alone
Could blind night owls and
Force bats to open their eyes

Let the bonfire of my love wrap you
Day or night

Let the tenderness of my love soothe you
Ups or downs

Let the faith of my love chase you
Heaven or hell

Only your French kiss could
Quench the flames that so consume me

Only… (300 words deleted here, haha~)

To you I pledge
My love
My desire
And my life

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hahahaha i am very impressed. very good -不会起名- 给 不会起名 发送悄悄话 (31 bytes) () 07/06/2010 postreply 22:34:05

这么有激情!感动死了!要是你写你自己,我定要变男娶你。 -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (18 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 00:25:15

里拉年轻, 哈哈哈 -不会起名- 给 不会起名 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 00:46:01

答里拉, 哈哈 -不会起名- 给 不会起名 发送悄悄话 (537 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 00:43:05

hahahaha, 2位写得绝。目前为止,法国两样东西给我留下了极其难忘的印象:) -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 07:07:22

很不错。里拉喜欢用slangs。bubs是什么?泡泡?还是弟弟?:):) -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 07:02:21

Sorry, typo, tub not bub. You guys have fun.~~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 08:08:20

哈哈哈,我还以为是bulb呢。所以我也用了个bulb,哈 -不会起名- 给 不会起名 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 13:19:13

i knew you were mistaken when i read your "bulb" line..:) -戏雨飞鹰- 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/07/2010 postreply 14:20:42

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