英译：致少女/For My Girl (Ver. 1.01)

英译：致少女/For My Girl

(Ver. 1.01)

【致少女】元梁
For My Girl/Yuan Liang
Translation: 美坛奇葩


清澈的小河
蜿蜒在
起伏的山壑

A clear river
Winding with
A gully in the mountain


简陋的小屋
点缀着
碧绿的秧禾

Simple shacks
Dotting the
Green cropland


斑斓的小鸟
飞舞在
茂密的枝柯

Colorful birds
Flying in
Dense leaves and branches

扬鞭的小童
吆喝着
笨重的牛车

Whip-flipping kids
Tending their
Heavy carts

秀美的少女
欢喜这
自然的景色

A beautiful girl
Enjoying such a
Natural scene

俏丽的面庞
纯净的眼波
你, 却是我的天国

Your pretty face
And innocent glances
Make my heaven


哦, 可爱的姑娘
你象那安详的白鸽
一切神情
都那么温柔, 平和

Oh, my lovely girl
Calm as a dove
Your expression
Is gentle and calm

哦, 亲爱的姑娘
你如那优雅的天鹅
每个姿态
都那么高贵, 独特

Oh, my dear girl
You are like a swan
Every gesture
Is noble and unique

多么希望 ----
这爱意始萌的欢乐
在此铭刻
你的笑靨
将永远珍放在
我心中的像册

How much I hope --
My joy of sprouting love
Is here inscribed
Your smile
Will always be in
My heart's album

多么盼望 --
这春心初漾的羞涩
不被涂抹
你的情怀
将永久难忘在
我未来的生活

How much I wish --
My shyness of beginning tenderness
Will not be stained
And your feelings
Will be unforgettable
In my whole life

多想就这样陪着你呵
好像苍山伴着青河 …

How much I want be with you
A green mountain would with a clear river …

所有跟帖： 

• i am waiting for ver 3.0, ha -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 15:36:50

• 心里发痒了吧.hehe -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:24:18

• 我不是翻译家， 我是挑剔家， ha -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:27:26

• me too,third silly. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:38:03

• 你不太傻。 我看你英文不错， 那令人头晕的64个句子已经奠定了你英文 -bearsback- ♂ (6 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:44:22

• that's a true statement -bearsback- ♂ (34 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:49:00

• ＂你不太傻＂这句不好。haha -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:55:18

• haha, i know, help15 is a smart woman, 她做事认真令人钦佩 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:00:07

• true。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (88 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:12:23

• 严肃认真的，我觉得你应该 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (246 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:34:55

• I can't talk much here because I am outside -bearsback- ♂ (112 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:08:50

• 对不起，朋友们。刚回来。想奇芭兄鞠躬！这里的朋友真让我感动，谢谢大家！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:40:55

• A green mountain would with a clear river …? -help15- ♀ (4 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:23:14

• 回复： -star-night- ♂ (95 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:55:30

• 'be" can be left out in poems? especially with "would"? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:10:44

• I think it is better to omit it. -star-night- ♂ (20 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:30:38

• i prefer -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:47:17

• 回复：i prefer -help15- ♀ (74 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:12:16

• hmm, i like it:) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:18:31

• Very good! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 19:22:30

• 非常精彩！ -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 16:50:18

• Thank Boss Boss. -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 18:27:29

• still Build 10? hahaha... -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (41 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:06:14

• 这位新同学在抢一位老同学的饭碗，连抢的方式都一样:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:19:02

• oh ... -star-night- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 17:57:58

• 美坛奇葩译得又快又好，元梁读后一定好高兴。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:05:27

• 刚回来，，我现在马上就读，，， -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:42:35

• 先向奇芭兄鞠躬！对不起，刚回来，，我马上就读，，， -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 20:44:47

• 奇葩兄真是有心人啊，实在是感谢你啊！你翻译的是最早的版本， -元梁- ♂ (188 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:00:39

• 感谢熊兄，15妹妹，雨鹰妹妹，板板妹妹，婉蕠妹妹和其他各位朋友的捧场！谢谢你们！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:07:37

• 再次感谢奇葩兄的心血付出！非常精彩。元梁十分感激。 -元梁- ♂ (30 bytes) () 06/18/2010 postreply 21:18:28

• Please see posting titled To: Mr.元梁 -美坛奇葩- ♂ (109 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 07:59:52

• 回复：英译：致少女/For My Girl (Ver. 1.01) -元梁- ♂ (1056 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 10:24:08

• Final version has been posted above. -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/19/2010 postreply 11:52:58