【英诗】Flicker in Tender (看图作文)

	Flicker in Tender How can I hold you in my palm? How can I pretend to be calm? Like a whisper in tender, Softly, is the finest balm. Fingers, elegantly roaming Body, gently rolling Sweet, a kiss in tender Tears, silently roiling…… Watch me dance When you feel low My flare waltzing in brilliance For you I glow! ……then…… Burned up……ashes in calm Cinder, held in your palm Like a flicker in tender Grieving in the ancient psalm.
2010-06-16

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• 哈哈～喜欢Deepwoods的美图，也来写首诗，自己都不知道什么文体 -千与.千寻- ♀ (36 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:21:40

• 那个蜡烛的火焰费了我好大的功夫... ：） -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:22:38

• 蜡烛的火焰制作的很传神，画龙点睛之妙。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:38:55

• so beautiful! -清晨咖啡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:58:43

• 谢谢咖啡，我是奶茶～ :) -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:20:24

• 诗美帖雅，音乐动听。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:17:39

• 又见紫君姐，好亲切！ -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:21:04

• 千千小妹，端午节快乐。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:35:07

• 也祝你端午节快乐！ -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:40:46

• 喜欢板板这首candle的诗，把你的诗copy如下 -千与.千寻- ♀ (744 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:57:10

• 严重客气了，感激不尽！ -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 17:33:43

• brilliant poem! -好学又好问- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 11:11:54

• 好学又好问MM好！谢谢鼓励～ -千与.千寻- ♀ (48 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 16:46:57

• 好美啊，充满了灵气 -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 17:33:16

• 过奖了，真的过奖了～我不行的。。。 -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 18:06:07