《行香子：京华丽人》A Beijing Beauty

是晓还昏，已冷犹焚；我和我，相远相亲。
香槟泼月，又湿衣裙；任一痕深，一痕浅，
一痕新。

也如春色，也似秋尘；我和我，相遇相分。
有花有梦，无果无根；任一生真，一生假，
一生人。

作者：纫秋兰

Smiling she's not;
Looking cool, she's seen hot.
How's the Party? Can't care less.
What's out there? Just a mess.
Let no golden chance slip by.
Everyone's life is but a lie.
A Tesla she drives.
Alone she cries
And survives.

 

--- 蓝灵

 

 

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• Hi, 蓝灵!Thanks for the story.I know too little about Beijing. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 19:58:06

• Hi, renqiulan! Truth be told, I couldn't pull off this -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:02:56

• project without your contribution. Thank you! -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:05:25

• My pleasure. Have you ever run into a gold digger girl -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:10:05

• by any chance? I'm just curious. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:12:05

• You bet. What struck me the most was her cynical outlook -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:18:57

• on life. Cynicism was and still is the order of the day. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:24:26

• I wasn't there but I could feel it when reading your poem. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:28:25

• Somehow the gold digger in my poem reminds me of Zola's Nana -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:51:20

• Zola put Nana front and center of the tragic -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:53:14

• ending days of Napoleon III's empire. Your thoughts? -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:56:44

• O dear! I wasn't a literature major. That said, I happen to -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:02:57

• have read Nana. I think Zola didn’t do much justice to his -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:06:04

• protagonist. Yes, Nana's "profession" wasn't exactly -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:09:05

• enviable. But then Nana had to make a living when eking out -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:11:41

• an existence was anything but easy. Zola might want to paint -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:14:38

• a French equivalent of the Byzantine empire in its twilight. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:18:50

• Zola was moralistic to a fault, which is why Nana the novel -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:30:12

• is so faulty. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 12:30:59

• Thank you, renqiulan, for your thoughts! -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:45:11

• 任一痕深，一痕浅， 一痕新。任一生真，一生假， 一生人。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:21:54

• A Tesla she drives. -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:22:18

• 从古诗词到英文Tesla ，俱佳，瞬间有穿越古今中外之感。：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:23:32

• 同感，谢谢蓝灵和秋兰分享！Have a great weekend! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:38:59

• 谢谢小西，周末愉快！ -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:44:28

• Thank you, 小西! You have a great weekend too! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:46:38

• 周末愉快，小西，蓝灵，秋兰！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:45:37

• 盈盈周六快乐！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:32:59

• 纫词中有“香槟泼月”句，我觉得富现代感，很能点出丽人心境。 -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:40:53

• “香槟泼月”句，富现代感，很能点出丽人心境。+100086! -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:47:57

• 谢谢盈盈！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:43:01

• Thank you, 盈盈! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:43:14

• 感谢盈盈鼓励！ -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:18:49

• 谢谢你们二位的精彩帖子！：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:48:42

• My pleasure, 盈盈！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:32:05

• 蓝灵是拙作的灵感泉源。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:34:14

• I respectfully disagree. Haha! -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:46:25

• It's a cute idea, isn't it? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:30:48

• 纫秋兰写的，我很喜欢。学填词，有意思极了。 -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:32:16

• I'm a greenhorn when it comes to poetry writing. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:52:56

• No, you are not. Actually you've humbled me. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:55:21

• I don't think so. Well, goodnight, 蓝灵 ! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 20:58:10

• Love it too! 任一痕深，一痕浅， 一痕新!!! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 23:00:22

• Me too. Hi, 暖冬！ -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:22:02

• Me three. Hi, 暖冬和蓝灵！：）） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:49:22

• Thank you all! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:35:55

• “行香子”的特有格式，在下喜爱。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:44:53

• Good night! Say hi to your wife for me. She's awesome! -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 21:05:22

• My wife is thrilled. Keep writing. Keep rhyming. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 21:09:24

• Wow, Qiu's poem is classic and has musicality of language! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 22:59:02

• Same here. He's the only sinologist I have ever come across. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:26:14

• I think renqiulan is a natural born poet in every Chinese -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:28:29

• sense of the word. He would beg to differ, though. Haha. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:30:46

• 蓝灵, I beg to differ. I'm a big fan of Chinese poetry though. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 15:46:30

• musicality of language, your comment is spot on! :) -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:47:07

• 秋兰和蓝灵，一古一今，两人都好有才气！蓝灵怎么会想到Tesla的：）欣赏了！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 23:04:35

• 感谢暖冬鼓励！ -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:31:41

• 感谢暖冬鼓励！拙词灵感来自蓝灵。我涂鸦，她不弃。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:14:23

• +100086！不能同意更多啦。：）） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 06:49:51

• +100086 too! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:41:13

• 中文词英文诗俱佳。京华一般泛指京城，不一定指北京吧，比如冠盖满京华，斯人独憔悴，杜甫指的是当时的京城长安 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 07:51:29

• 感谢godog对“京华”的阐释。只想说，纫秋兰“行香子”小令写的是京华；我的自由体英诗写的是北京，拙作并非中词英译。 -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 08:26:18

• 蓝灵，you have a style---short, sharp and shapely. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 11:08:06

• Thanks for the first syllable rhyme of yours---short, sharp -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:51:31

• and shapely. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 18:53:01

• 感谢godog鼓励！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/27/2024 postreply 10:57:45