【蓝绿第二次绑架】绿团 A fawn to a deer

本帖于 2022-12-18 11:23:17 时间, 由普通用户 妖妖灵 编辑

A fawn to a deer

Author:妖妖灵

Last summer,

she was a helpless lonely fawn,

hiding in the sun-dappled bushes,

with white spots covering her body

for camouflage.

Time flies. One and half years later,

Winter is here.

She becomes a brave deer,

dancing with her slend legs,

with the background music Jingle bells.

All the white spots that used to be on her back

become snow flakes flying in the joyful air. 

 

Revised version by renqiulan:表达更地道,非常感谢他:)

Last summer

she was a helpless lonely fawn,

hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes,

with white spots covering her body

for camouflage.

Time flies. One and a half years later,

Winter is here.

She becomes a brave deer,

dancing with her slender legs

to the tune of Jingle bells in the background.

All the white spots on her back

are flying off as snowflakes in the joyful air.

 

移花接木:铲后综合征,post-shovel syndrome

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Unexpected encounter 

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A fawn 摄影:移花接木 

 

雪趣 视频制作:移花接木

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I applaud your idea... -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (85 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 15:13:52

突然有了这个灵感,把它记录下来。又改了改,你帮我再看看语法问题? -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 17:12:46

I'll see what I can do. Here is my input: -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (674 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:23:21

改得好极啦!非常非常感谢!:) -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:36:12

Thanks! You did strike the right chord with readers like me. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:44:26

Pls check my input again.By all means make it right for you. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:49:55

I put your revised version in my main post! 也让大家参考学习!非常感谢!! -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:51:52

I think I have a typo in my input.. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:00:48

好文章是改出来的!学到很多!第一步先写,然后一遍一遍去改!才能进步!你太厉害啦! -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:53:15

It is your idea. It is your creation. I am your reader. -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:56:46

我为了记住你的改写,专门写的,反复对照几遍,终于把你的改写都写下来了:) -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 20:59:47

I think I have a typo in my input: -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (95 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:02:26

谢谢!改了:) -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:04:41

Right on! -renqiulan- 给 renqiulan 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/17/2022 postreply 21:52:06

baby is here -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (129 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 05:20:48

找网管把那次活动中所有丢失的贴都找回了。你去看一看?还记得哪次活动吗? -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 08:45:58

恭喜妖妖。首页进来,谢谢网管,【蓝绿第二次绑架】绿团 A fawn to a deer推荐成功 -梅雨潭- 给 梅雨潭 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 17:18:29

赞灵灵, 小鹿真可爱, 灵灵的诗歌很美。节日快乐。 -chuntianle- 给 chuntianle 发送悄悄话 chuntianle 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/18/2022 postreply 21:57:29

来到美坛才知道小鹿是fawn的 -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 12/19/2022 postreply 10:09:06

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