写诗的第一步：多读诗。转一个勃朗宁的，How do I love thee. 可以注意一下押韵

WRITTEN BY
ELIZABETH BARRETT BROWNING

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. 
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height 
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight 
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace. 
I love thee to the level of every day's 
Most quiet need, by sun and candlelight. 
I love thee freely, as men strive for Right; 
I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise. 
I love with a passion put to use 
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith. 
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose 
With my lost saints, - I love thee with the breath, 
Smiles, tears, of all my life! - and, if God choose, 
I shall but love thee better after death.

所有跟帖： 

• 我跟两首以前贴过的AABB, ABAB -移花接木- ♂ (2431 bytes) () 10/10/2022 postreply 20:40:36

• 真好，内容第一，押韵第二。 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/10/2022 postreply 22:19:54

• 好诗呀，过两天给你配个音加上图。 -AP33912- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/11/2022 postreply 06:43:00

• 是，这首诗非常有名。好，等着：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/11/2022 postreply 08:49:27

• 先写中文诗歌 -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/11/2022 postreply 10:04:00

• 是一个办法。但是用中文思维不太容易押韵。诗的好处是可以不用太讲究逻辑缜密：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/11/2022 postreply 14:34:19

• 灵灵太可爱了，你是说诗人们都倾向于在胡说八道吗？这个我完全同意的说！！ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2022 postreply 12:18:57

• LOL。冤枉，我没这个意思啊：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2022 postreply 14:43:40