《May I Offer This to You》诗二首 · 歌一曲

本帖于 2022-06-06 18:16:31 时间, 由普通用户 忒忒绿 编辑

网红新歌《二泉吟》

This song is beautiful and deeply touching, meanwhile conveys emotions which match the world's current moods well.

Enjoy listening to the song and reading the verses. Could you find some connections between them?

 

《May I Offer This to You》

by TweetinGreen and TwoHedgehogs

May I offer this to you?
have a cup of tea with you
listening to the chirps of birds
meditate together
or stare at the sky
in a daze side by side
Would that be what you like?

May I offer this to you?
go on hikes with you
roam in the parks hand in hand
or elope with you to sit on a sandbank
watching the tides
go in and out
Would that be what you like?

May I offer them to you?



《Sky Leaks》

by TweetinGreen

children cry
ladies weep
seniors sigh
youngs groan

the sky leaks

What're there high above
clouds
a heaven
golds
lightning
souls
and …

when will it be
refurbished
and sunshine and
you be
there only







 

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友友们一周愉快:)歌来自网络,不是我唱的:)) -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 16:54:00

歌和第二首诗意境比较像。第一首看天看海看潮汐,好浪漫。谁是Twohedgehogs? -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:33:37

聪明的凤,是的第二首与歌的情绪关联更多:)不过第一首的基调也是抑郁的:) -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:52:00

是一位网上诗友:) -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/06/2022 postreply 18:54:00

赞!品读。。。 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/07/2022 postreply 09:54:02

Sad, but so touching and beautiful, thanks for sharing. -CBA7- 给 CBA7 发送悄悄话 CBA7 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2022 postreply 08:11:34

touching! your words, not the music :-) -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/09/2022 postreply 15:06:21

点赞。很棒。 -chuntianle- 给 chuntianle 发送悄悄话 chuntianle 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/13/2022 postreply 00:26:40

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