墨水和颜料

Paint flows from your eyes

Paint flows from your eyes
purple
to your dimples
Aspirates to rise
and brush my sky
till the clouds
red and blue
fill my eyes

© a day ago

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Jawahar Gupta - Paint flows from your eyes to brush the canvas f my mind of sky with colors of your first hand choice to make the happy rainbow,

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Beatricelena - Such a beautiful poem. short but meaningful. looking forward to your new publications.

 

Ink


I'm writing to you in blue
my known unknown
It's the ink gifted by you
What's flowing from the fountain
makes my pen stroll through mountains
oceans and dunes
and lost in a misty tune
But the burden
of the ink
wet and heavy like a steel curtain
wraps around my feet and sinks
to the Milky Way's brink


© 7 days ago, vague • rhyme   
 

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Jawahar Gupta - this is beautiful writing to admit the honest received gift,

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Jaganathan1476 - Good rhyming poem dear friend.i love reading poems that rhyme.great work. keep on it. 

 

Keshmai - Writing what you feel is a powerful thing to do. Thank you for this inspirational poem.

Lovely

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ink 和blue用得巧妙。What's flowing from the fountain 句子里的‘s 有必要吗? -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/31/2022 postreply 21:12:42

谢谢,是啊,可以考虑present tense -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 11:35:33

Flowers fill my eyes of purple & my heart sings a vibrato -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 07:11:33

谢谢 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 11:35:50

恭喜颤音。首页进来,谢谢网管,墨水和颜料 推荐成功 -梅雨潭- 给 梅雨潭 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/01/2022 postreply 13:51:22

深深感谢! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/02/2022 postreply 09:48:05

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