When wind carves

When wind carves

When wind carves
I rush to cover your hair with a scarf
But I tumble
amid wind's rumble
So the scarf flies in curve
to the rhythm of wind's swerve
till it touches your face that's void of crumple
Your face that keeps wind humble
For millions of years your beauty is conserved
by the wind that admires and carves

inspired by Lady in the wind in lower antelope canyon © 9 days ago

  
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Lou Lou.x - you create such a vivid image and scroll a piece with a good rhyme scheme and flow 

7 days ago 

 

G910513 - I like the imagery used here, and that opening line is a very memorable one.

8 days ago 

 

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• 画面押韵都运用得好巧妙！ -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/28/2022 postreply 14:56:41

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• 谢谢，瞎玩 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/28/2022 postreply 21:01:36

• 能写英文诗的，都是才华横溢的！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (113 bytes) () 05/28/2022 postreply 16:34:11

• 俺只是瞎玩 读过一些 emily Dickenson 的，然后心痒手痒就码字了 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/28/2022 postreply 21:06:19

• 我们这里上周, when wind carves trees branches got ripped off, -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2022 postreply 07:34:25