Dust 一首旧的 没看懂留言

Dust


In a slender and willow-lined alley
hides a lonely old tea house
A trace of the sun in late spring
squeezes through the mottled wooden windows
and lights up the wandering dust
who's daydreaming a fireworks-filled night

The crescent moon is hiding in the clouds
and shuts tightly the doors and windows of dreams
Embracing loneliness of the deep alley
a breeze whisks beyond the eaves
and never hears the dust's bellow
that's as silent as its mother, soil
© a month ago, 

Likes: ChrisW, AP YouxiaHaikusaur, Lyrical Dove

AP YouxiaHaikusaur - thus the legacy of the beauty and the dust of the nature's legacy

Nice writea month ago   

Lyrical Dove - This is really beautiful! I love the scenery! I can absolutely understand the feeling of tiny things going unheard/unnoticed! Beautiful! Lovely!a month ago   

 

先写了中文的底子

 

尘埃

 

窄窄的深巷

孤零零的老茶坊

晚春的残阳

透过斑驳的木窗

伴着尘埃彷徨

 

月弯躲进了云端

梦的门窗紧关

拥着深巷的孤单

清风拂过屋檐

不曾听到尘埃的呼喊

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我上学时就总爱对着阳光下的尘埃发呆 -移花接木- 给 移花接木 发送悄悄话 移花接木 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/17/2022 postreply 18:23:00

握手 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 17:13:48

是不是诗评要写成诗一样,让读者看不懂,才有味道?:) -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/17/2022 postreply 18:47:49

所以是美的遗产,自然的遗产却惹上了尘埃 -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/17/2022 postreply 18:53:06

有道理 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 17:13:03

what was its autorank? 5? -忒忒绿- 给 忒忒绿 发送悄悄话 忒忒绿 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/17/2022 postreply 20:45:00

可能,没留下,是程序评 -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 17:13:34

恭喜颤音。首页进来,谢谢网管,Dust 一首旧的 没看懂留言 推荐成功 -梅雨潭- 给 梅雨潭 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 15:06:25

深深的谢谢! -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 17:12:44

赞中英文双语诗!谢谢分享写诗的过程。原来是先写中文打底,学习了。 -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 05/18/2022 postreply 18:39:05

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