试译《秋夜寄邱员外》刘禹锡

怀君属秋夜，
散步咏凉天。
空山松子落，
幽人应未眠。

 

An Autumn night like this makes me think of you

As I walk and sense the coolness of the air.

The sound of falling pine cones echoes in the mount.

What keeps you awake at this hour?

所有跟帖： 

• 凑一版 wordy 的: :) -ibelieu- ♀ (425 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 17:14:26

• 每次押韵都妥妥的：）为什么第一句是“find me”？ -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:31:46

• 倒装了，顺过来是 -ibelieu- ♀ (410 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:45:25

• 话不多，简单明了：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2022 postreply 19:31:03