请英文高手帮我改改完美一下，谢谢。

A cool summer night in London, I woke up and wrote to you
I could walk on the street naked thinking of you wanting me...
You say, don't be too naked it's cold there
Then I saw a fox crossing the street, disappeared
Into woods in the central London
I wonder if it is just lust like the summer haze

You are fading away, but still
I see you sitting on a bench at Parnassus
I hear you talking inside Moffitt
I feel you touching my perfect body with your mind
But I've never dreamed of you
I just wake up and write to you

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• 小谋，真是久违了，问好。 -斓婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:37:35

• 谢谢，惭愧，好久没来，学习huangfei -小谋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:40:26

• 真高兴又见到小谋，有空就常来玩呀。 -斓婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:43:00

• Anyone can make it flow like a song? -小谋- ♀ (4 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 13:00:51

• In London, at a cool summer night ... -lucidus- ♂ (18154 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 13:57:21

• 坚持用你学到的口语。勇敢一点。不要被语法规则绊倒。 -SanGabriel- ♀ (408 bytes) () 07/17/2013 postreply 08:58:58

• 谢各位鼎力支持，我想对其中几点做些解释和补充一点背景说明。:-) -小谋- ♀ (805 bytes) () 07/17/2013 postreply 21:00:12

• Then keep what he said. And the bit of teasing in it. -SanGabriel- ♀ (1087 bytes) () 07/18/2013 postreply 00:19:51

• this is what he replied me...It's a song lyrics.. -小谋- ♀ (1017 bytes) () 07/22/2013 postreply 14:00:48