优点明显，缺点见内

我还没听原读。你的优点是美味足，而且这次你的节奏也比上次好.

缺点是个别发音不到位.

271. We should set up camp here.(E off, P爆破不足)

272. It’s not safe to keep food in your tent.(a bit too short)
276. I’ll go gather firewood.(not quite right)
277. Does anyone have a flashlight?
278. Hunting is not allowed in this part of the woods.
279. This is a popular camping area.
280. It’s not safe to go camping by yourself.
281. I can’t believe there are so many things to buy for our camping trip.
282. Starting a fire without matches, building a shelter from wood, cooking over a campfire, and lots more.
283. I thought we were going to make our own fire with wood we gathered.
284. Well, the most obvious is that the animals will eat all our food and we’ll be left with nothing to eat.
285. The smell of the food might attract dangerous animals to our campsite.

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• 谢谢！可以具体指点一下r发的问题吗？ -i999- ♀ (47 bytes) () 08/24/2011 postreply 22:45:22

• 你大概是第3第4个人跟我说这个了，发音的小地方不注意。 -i999- ♀ (70 bytes) () 08/24/2011 postreply 23:03:51