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《What's Your Language?》《什么是你的语言?》

(2022-10-12 22:24:41) 下一个

《What's Your Language?》

love
answers a British girl 
counting the ravens on Tower Bridge

amor
shouts a Spanish boy
kicking a ball in a soccer field

amour
says a French woman 
sitting on the black iron bench under a sycamore tree

Liebe
whispers a German gentleman 
riding a white horse in a forest


speaks a Chinese lady 
walking on the Great Wall with a purple skirt

【备注】这首英文诗于10月7日发表在Allproetry,并在当天被选上了首页。Allpoetry is the world's largest and best poetry site. 下面是评分(Autorank)和部分评论(Comments):

Autorank Total 10 ( higher is reduced to 10 ), professional similarity 10 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2)

Likes: Ray Cope, Sand Singer, Jferry, Skyoak37, Treepower34, kaye, Rawena, Rowan Fox, Samara, LinaLNU, Poetryan, Ava L, Joy2B, Stiff Little Shrew, Adventurous, brendan law, Cexi Steph, Dark Migration

Poetryan - Grá  (love)
responds an Irish boy
reading a lovely poem in the comfort of a home

Jferry - Yes, there are several ways and languages in which to celebrate love. And we should celebrate that fact ... as this lovely poem does.

Stiff Little Shrew - Great idea. Perhaps all languages are languages of love after all.

P.S. The Tower of London is famous for it's ravens, below are the links about the ravens on Tower Bridge:

The Ravens at the Tower of London, England (historic-uk.com)

Ravens of the Tower of London - Wikipedia

中文版本

《什么是你的语言?》


一个英国女孩回答
她在数塔桥上的乌鸦


一个西班牙男孩喊道
他在足球场踢球


一个法国女人说
她坐在梧桐树下的黑色铁椅上


一位德国绅士低语
他在森林里骑着一匹白马


一位中国女士说
她穿着紫色的裙子走在长城上

相关链接:

爱的星空: 《What's Your Language?》《什么是你的语言?》 - 由CBA7发表 - 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)

书香之家: 《What's Your Language?》《什么是你的语言?》 - 由CBA7发表 - 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)

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CBA7 回复 悄悄话 回复 '艾唱' 的评论 : 谢谢大歌星小艾的美言和鼓励。“爱是永恒的主题”,小艾说的太对了。

CBA7 回复 悄悄话 回复 '菲儿天地' 的评论 : 谢谢菲儿赏读和点评。

艾唱 回复 悄悄话 爱是永恒的主题。。。
艾唱 回复 悄悄话 穿着紫裙走在长城上的小西一定美:)喜欢小西才女的作品。加油↖(^ω^)↗
菲儿天地 回复 悄悄话 《What's Your Language?》非常有韵味,怪不得上首页,评分高。:)
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