Frozen ashes Frozen ashes from whose bones left alone for ages in the ark in the dark But the ashes glow as white as snow © a day ago, destiny Likes: Amlu Amlu - Powerful brevity with strong imagery. well penned Great a day ago Freedom
Bones anchored to tendons Tendons anchored to muscles Where is bones' freedom
Ask wind in which freedom flows Ask fire in which freedom burns Hugs between tendons and muscles Dances between wind and fire Bones into ashes fly and paint the sky gray © a day ago,
Amlu - A powerful ink on freedom..so creative with strong imagery. How true! bones are not feer at all..Great write making the readers ponder on it. Liked it Paidge Searchwell - A deep poem bringing on analytical questions. Great work! a day ago |