伪骆宾王版:翻译英文诗 The Red Wheel Barrow
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红推车,

负载一何多。

清霑添釉彩,

(雨清添釉彩)

白羽绕轮歌


(最后两句没对仗,待斟酌。不管平仄的话, "清雨添釉彩”和下句配合可能更有意思)
 
The Red Wheel Barrow
(by William Carlos Williams)

So much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rained
water

beside the white
chickens.