我给78分。To receive so many pieces of bad news减10分。还有。。。

Institute在美国是专科学校的统称。For me and those around me是中文，英文没有这个句子。I was scheduled to give a speech on civil rights。。。这句翻译得很好。aimlessly???????????美式英语不用这个词，只能在字典里找得到。Many many more.

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• 谢谢！第一句很败，翻得有臭又长。 -非文学青年- ♀ (48 bytes) () 06/20/2011 postreply 22:24:34

• "so many pieces of bad news" 虽然长但语法是对的。 you can use "a lot of ne -tern2- ♀ (167 bytes) () 06/21/2011 postreply 07:15:15

• Thank you very much! 终于还算有明眼人，呵呵。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2011 postreply 07:22:55