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来源: shuidandan 于 2011-05-20 11:49:30 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (642 bytes)

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"Accounting Senior Specialist needed at XXXX in XXXX to manage accounting
functions and coordinate, conduct, and document financial analysis projects.
Masters Degree in Accounting and 2 years experience performing account
analyses and developing new accounting functions and financial reports
utilizing SAGE, Oracle, Visual Basic and SQL required. OR Bachelors Degree
in Accounting and 5 years experience performing account analyses and
ensuring implementation of departmental controls utilizing SAGE, Oracle,
Visual Basic, and SQL required."

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