如果硬挑毛病的话,结尾还可以更充实一些。 比如说:
As I watched the sun go down, the shadows of the tall willow tree swaying in the sunset, and the animals playing, I sighed contently to myself. This was nature. This was a good life.
如果硬挑毛病的话,结尾还可以更充实一些。 比如说:
As I watched the sun go down, the shadows of the tall willow tree swaying in the sunset, and the animals playing, I sighed contently to myself. This was nature. This was a good life.
• 谢谢,老师让家长挑错 -tax2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/03/2018 postreply 18:43:12
• 赞有底气的一塌糊涂。。。 -古代的事物- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/03/2018 postreply 18:44:55
• 有什么底气?我语法很差,当年考试语法最差的 -tax2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/03/2018 postreply 18:46:09
• 这个底气怎么讲? 文豪给指点一下呗 -阳光玉兔- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/03/2018 postreply 18:49:14
• 嘿嘿嘿嘿。。。 -古代的事物- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/03/2018 postreply 18:53:09