我也学着试译下, 请指正:
So much I feel yet it seems I do not care at all;
That I'm unable to smile in the festive I know alone.
While the candle takes the agony of parting to heart,
And sheds its tears on my behalf till the dawn.
我也学着试译下, 请指正:
So much I feel yet it seems I do not care at all;
That I'm unable to smile in the festive I know alone.
While the candle takes the agony of parting to heart,
And sheds its tears on my behalf till the dawn.
• 谢谢知音君。你的第一句翻译的到位,忠实原文且英文通顺。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (1386 bytes) () 08/25/2016 postreply 18:19:57
• 多谢沅湘老师的肯定和指导建议! -缘自知音- ♂ (941 bytes) () 08/26/2016 postreply 10:41:16
• 真是知音。修改后既忠实原文也是流畅的英文。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2016 postreply 17:26:28